Li's chest sticks out too much, I think. His belt has strange pointiness and doesn't seem to be 3D, mostly based on the border between the belt and the shirt. Unless you've put a beard on him that I can't see, the concavity of his chin seems odd. His weapons also have a sketchy, inexact quality that contrasts with the style of the rest of the image. Other than that, I really like how you drew Li.

Tao's head is huge and the facial features seems squashed into the bottom part of her face. Her forehead's way too large and her breasts are placed too high up. The arms and the dress are well done, except for two lines that appear on the side of her left shoulder. The right upper line there should be erased and the left lower one should be shortened.

Good job ^_^.

...isn't it "Bailong"?

Thenx for the comments, girl! I drew this a few months ago, and I'm gettin' a lil better...
I see what you mean about his Nun-chucks or whatever they're called....I didn't give it much though. I made his chest a lil too big cause that how it was drawing in the manga....not that I copied it, I guess it just influence me to draw it dat way. lol Woah, I also see what you mean about his chin....lol

As for Jun, I can never make character's heads the right size, so I apoligize for dat. I'll keep the rest in mind for when I'm drawing another female character.....

Sorry if what I just said seems weird.....I'm tired......anywayz....thenx the comments....

I haven't drawn males' profile view in a long time.. but something about the chest looks off... I'm not sure @_@ Ither than that it looks good! I'm liking the coloring of that chain though I like how it looks old and weathered!

Yeah, I know about the chest, in the original manga, the artist made his chest stick out a bit.........I guess I did it too much.

Hehe so it was the original artist's fault!! Hehe as long as you know though

Cool!

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Thenkyu for the !!!

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I love their facial expressions! I also love how you made Li more like a zombie.